The Questionnaire

We asked the people to rate the following questions out of 5 (1 being very bad 5 being excellent) and then to give any constructive critisism at the end.                                                                                          These were the average scores

1. Did the opening appeal to you?                                      4
2. Did the black and white create suspense?                     4
3. Was the monologue clear?                                             4
4. Did the monologue create suspense?                            4
5. How successful was the montage?                                1
6. How successful was the cutting and walking shot?        2
7. How was the positioning of the credits?                         2
8. How effective was the sound?                                       1
9. Did the ending make sense?                                          1
10. What is your general rating of the opening?                   2  

What was good about our film?

Beginning is really good, Beginning is better than the second part

Kettle noise is good

Good title positioning

Good cutting effect when walking up the street

What needs to be improved?

Tension is spoiled when it starts the montage

Montage music is too upbeat and happy, sounds like a 'children's nursery rhyme type song'

The second bit just doesn't fit

From our feedback we realised that the different sections were too contrasting and made it confusing so we decided to refilm the second part with a new idea.